Writing 101, Day Eight: Death to Adverbs


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Go to a local café, park, or public place and report on what you see.

Get detailed: leave no nuance behind.

 

Let’s go.

Picnic anyone?

Air clean, fresh,

birds singing, sun shining, kids playing.

Gnarled gum trees furnish dappled sunlight protection

while a seductive river invites heat relief.

Heaven on earth.

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